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Does anyone know how a deadbolt can lock itself?
My mom had one of her hissie fits and stormed out of the house. She slammed the door so hard all Storm Rattle the windows in the place rattled. Somehow the deadbolt locked itself and I had to open the door for her. She accused me of locking her out but I didn't. Could somebody please, please, please tell me how this happened so I can get her off my back. The deadbolt is the kind that needs a key.
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19 Responses to “Secrets About Storm Rattle”

  1. Jon B Says:
    December 19th, 2010 at 9:31 am

    If it is just making the noise going over bumps then it is probably sway bar links.You should replace both front sway bar links.Jon.

  2. SiLeNce the AffLictioN Says:
    December 19th, 2010 at 9:00 pm

    Very lyrical, although I could not pinpoint everything. It’s good, though. answer mines?http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index;_ylt=Au.cqLVwjbi7mlweO0cSBxbsy6IX;_ylv=3?qid=20090524221001AAk78kj

  3. Brian A Says:
    December 20th, 2010 at 9:03 am

    More likely than ice would be some salt or grit. If the car has disc brakes in the rear, there may be some wedged in between the in-board shield and the rotor.

  4. Nice Says:
    December 20th, 2010 at 8:37 pm

    It is a very interesting story; probably, a tale (a simple narrative with no complicated plot).Comments:(1) piecemeal presentation of the main character: the reader has to read a few lines before realising who the main character really is (his name, profession, etc.);(2) credibility or verisimillitude (= “semblance of truth”): this is what makes your story interesting;(3) “Show” vs. “tell”: you present the main character in action (instead of merely telling the story); presentation of characters through actions is a powerful device.(4) flashback: you should introduce a flashback after “ubiquitously”, showing one of the captain’s dreams or recollections that will (A) reveal aspects of his character and (B) add an element of surprise (or doubt) to the narrative;(5) Unexpected ending: the reader has to infer what happens (“driftwood floating near the ship”; ” knowing what this means”);(6) closing sentence: the unfinished sentence without any punctuation is a powerful (although it is rather abrupt here) way of showing the reader what happens. I do think you should extend the ending a little.Comments and suggestions:1st # :( A) line 2: omit “one last time” (do not announce the ending at the beginning of the story);(B) lines 5-6: “faint-hearted”2nd # :( A) lines 2-3: “[...] the sun casting its last night on the blue nothingness ahead” [beautiful image];(B) line 5: “as it crept closer”;(C) lines 6-7: “the sheer size of the storm rapidly approaching.”;(D) line 8: ” of the boat. The crew [...]“;(E) line 9: “storm would bring others far larger than this”;(F) “foreboding danger.” [omit "to come" to avoid redundancy];(G) lines 11-12: “The wind now whistled loudly and wildly, making it hard to talk.”;(H) lines 12-13: “As they desperately tried to hold on to anything, they prepared the boat for the storm”.2nd # :( A) lines 3-4: “on deck. The treacherous storm was right above them now as they fought it in a boat [...]“;(B) lines 6-7: “The monster now spilled onto the deck, making it [...]“;(C) line 11: ” However, every so often, [...]“;(D) line 12: “strike, and the sky would light up, reminding him [...]“;(E) line 14: ” nowhere to go”;(F) lines 17-19: “He knew the boat would not last through a storm of this size; yet, he was unsure whether to tell them right away or simply do nothing to avoid panic.”;(G) line 21: “beside them, until silence [...]“;(H) lines 21-22: “The wind stopped. The waves [...]“;(I) line 24: “hoping this silence meant [...]“.3rd # :( A) line 2: “He yelled at the [...]“;(B) line 2: “exciting, although not for the weak”;(C) line 5: “The captain looked out at [...]“.4th # :( A) line 3: “the slow-moving, creaky, flimsy ship made the journeys [...]” [omit the reference to "taxpayers"];(B) line 2: “before the oppressive rays beat down, creating [...]“;(C) line 4: “at about 7 a.m., alerting [...]” [early in the morning?];(D) lines 4-5: ”driftwood, floating [...]“.Hope it helps. Let me know.

  5. oldtimer Says:
    December 21st, 2010 at 9:26 am

    The lead 3 paras lead to a conclusion of the barn collapsing, not to a train wreck. There does not seem to be a need for para 2-5 except to get the heroine outside to hear the whistle.

  6. Aly Says:
    December 21st, 2010 at 9:03 pm

    it started well… but it kept jumping all over and some things that should have been vivid were very vague. but its good for eighth grade i suppose.try not to jump all over the place so much..

  7. x_thelastdj Says:
    December 22nd, 2010 at 8:45 am

    I like your title, but something that just came to mind was “Outskirts of Discovery” or “On The Outskirts of Discovery” …. I don’t know. But I like it. It’s a little bit like my style of writing, or at leas I like to think so. (:

  8. . Says:
    December 22nd, 2010 at 8:58 pm

    I think it’s really amazing. I love the way you described things, and kept describing things in a steady flow, without any really awkward sentences. =) I love the first piece and how you described the girl setting fire to the furniture, it is really amazing. I’m not an adult writer or anything, I’m just a teenager, but I have a writer network you can join. The site is called http://www.writerfriendly.webs.com it’s a kind of small community made up of about 77 people, although not all of them go on regularly. It’s a really friendly writing community and it’s safe, too. I hope to see you there! =) I’m MyClockworkHeart. =) I hope you get this published, though!~MyClockworkHeart

  9. Gideon on Fire Says:
    December 23rd, 2010 at 9:31 am

    The first line sounded like a witches brew ; – Cinnamon dust. Tepid blood of pear. Autumn bitter cordial, mahogany gilded chair- that mood never left until the last stanza which left me feeling confused in so much that i am not sure if it is a happy place or not. However, it does come across that you are alone and lonely, and again i am not sure if that is what your trying to portray.I love this line:- the copper sharp iris of the fox. Which gives me the sense that your a “country girl”

  10. whyhuhwhy Says:
    December 23rd, 2010 at 9:31 pm

    4 Eerie (Erie)#7 (just a guess but may fit)..Gun and Fun!

  11. desert camel Says:
    December 24th, 2010 at 8:56 am

    sadly you have bent a con rod,causing the piston to knock on the cranks balance weights….i know cos ive just fixed a car with the same problem…it only cost me £200 for parts as i did the work myself….its not the piston thats at fault,but the longer you use it the more it will get damaged….

  12. Neko Says:
    December 24th, 2010 at 9:21 pm

    Overall, well written, I believe the idea you have has potential. However, you should advance your writing a little…for example, instead of “It was like all the lights of her life had abruptly shut off.”, I would suggest using something more along the lines of, “It was as if all the light within her life had suddenly shattered.” Try to go more in depth to your character’s emotions and try not to limit yourself to common words. Attempt to use words that can form a picture in the reader’s mind. I did enjoy reading it though, keep up the good work. (:

  13. nychole38 Says:
    December 25th, 2010 at 8:39 am

    Maybe if you are willing to and can afford it, fix the things that you can fix yourself and send your landlord a bill for these repairs. Also maybe you can deduct the cost from your rent next month. Sit down and write a letter of the repairs you did deducted from the rent that you owe. Make sure you take pictures of the before and after and keep all receipts (only send the landlord copies of the receipts – no originals). I’m not sure but you could look into if you can withhold the rent until the repairs are done if you don’t do them yourself. You could also try calling your congressman and telling him/her the situation. You could tell the landlord that if shehe doesn’t get these repairs done, then you are going to call your congressman about it.

  14. poohbaby Says:
    December 25th, 2010 at 9:04 pm

    1.B2.D3.C4.B5.D6.A7.B8.A9.B10.B11.A12.C13.Ctrust me ur will get them all right becaus ei did the same test and those were my answers and i got them all right.

  15. joniboni Says:
    December 26th, 2010 at 8:55 am

    Well, the belt sounds like the likely cause of a squeaky sound when the engine is cold. When you were driving the car and it felt like it was going to die, were you driving down the road or at an idle?Either way, I would have it checked to try to minimize a major breakdown when you least expect or want it.

  16. momma2mingbu Says:
    December 26th, 2010 at 9:05 pm

    Get room darkening blinds and heavy curtains for her windows to block out the lightening.Let her sleep with some music through headphones or white noise machine to help with the storm sounds. Or ear plugs? Have you tried helping her do research into storms and learning more about them? Maybe that would help to quell her fears.

  17. Mayan Says:
    December 27th, 2010 at 9:15 am

    The writing is good. Promising. You have some development in you future as a writer, but this is good enough to indicate that you have the potential to become a great writer. Here are some english comp edits to give you examples of what you need to do as your next step in development. This is not a complete list of edits, I stopped editing after I had plenty of examples.frequent occurring should be frequently occurringprovided for me limited spare time should beallowed only limited spare timeadmire deeper should beadmire more deeplyI know for a fact, would devastate most people’s lives should beI suspect would be impossible to take for some people.[I don't know your character very well so I could be wrong here, but the character doesn't seem to be so imature as to believe that "most people" would be "devastated" by a sudden reduction in time for a social life. If I'm right, the comment is out of character. And the phrase "I know for a fact" is very unlikely to be a true statement.]no limits to mother nature should beno limit[Do something about that decision to drive at 80kmph with five feet of visibility. It is not believable. Perhaps visibility was better, the speed of 80kmph was safe, then the visibility suddenly got worse.]turn up ahead, I wouldn’t should beturn up ahead, and I wouldn’t clash of thunder rattled my nineteen ninety-eight Nissan Maxima, sending a chill down my spine. The strike of lightning that followed, however, was devastatingshould be revised so that lightning preceeds the thunder. And the description of the car is out of place. This is a dramatic moment, not suitable for describing the car.halting stopshould bejarring stop.

  18. Skattie B Says:
    December 27th, 2010 at 8:59 pm

    philippines is actually having a drout right now, is my grammar correct? coz i really don’t know how to use the word drout..anyways, we’re actually putting salt in our soil just to create artificial rains! i mean, our main dam isn’t getting any water at all! i wish it would rain!!

  19. TD Euwaite? Says:
    December 28th, 2010 at 9:30 am

    There does seem to be a lot kissing going on…My cousin Winslow Boatwreck is from Hibbing, MN. He use to steal lunch money from that little Zimmerman kid. I like to think, in his own way, that Winslow helped forge the character that brought us “Dear Landlord” and “The Bunkhouse Theme.”

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